Monday, 4 June 2012
IELTS WRITING SAMPLE
IELTS Writing Sample
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Some people say the government should not put money into building
theatres and sports stadiums; they should spend more money on medical care and
education.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
You should write at least 250 words.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience.
model answer:
What would the world be like without Shakespeare or the Olympics? While medical
care and education are perhaps the highest causes to which money can be
contributed, the arts and athletics are in some ways just as valuable. So, to
ask the government to not extend support to these two areas could be just as
detrimental to the welfare of society as the lack of sufficient health care and
education.
The Romans believed in “mens sana in corpore sano”. In short, that there is
indeed a correlation between a healthy body and healthy mind. When we are
healthy, we feel better and so are more likely to be productive academically.
Plus, the practice of sports can also teach us the very same discipline we need
for our studies. Why even a brisk walk or watching an exciting athletic match
can refresh the mind for greater work. Moreover, sports can serve to create
healthier bodies, which in turn would serve as a form of “preventive medicine”
thereby cutting down on medical costs. In the same vein, the arts are known to
induce a sense of well-being in performers and audience alike, reducing mental
problems and their associated physical manifestations and again, medical costs.
As such, building theatres and stadiums, which spur interest in the arts and
sports respectively, actually would be practically identical to spending money
on medical care and education!
Now I realize the question specifically addresses the building of theatres and
sports stadiums by government. Some people would contend athletics and the arts
can still be enjoyed and practiced without such constructions. I would hazard
that these buildings stand as the altars to the sports and arts worlds,
inspiring would-be athletes and performers. Without such venues where would
sports spectators and music aficionados be able to enjoy these events? Now some
other people would also say business could support their construction, but we
know the avarice of business could very likely jeopardize the lofty spirit of
athletics and the arts just as well. Therefore, allowing government to retain
some say in the matter on behalf of the people would, I believe, be in the best
interest of the people.
In short, as long as the government does no go overboard in its expenditures for
these buildings and uses such venues for the benefit of all, then, as mentioned
above, people will benefit in terms of both medical care and education as well.
This is not to say the government should neglect medical care and education, but
rather to think of this not as an either-or choice but as a win-win situation
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Describe the best present/gift you have received:
1. Who send it? What
is the gift? What is it for?
2. When did you
receive it?
3. Detail information
about the present.
Last year , my wife celebrated my birthday at home. She bought a
electronic dictionary as birthday gift. I like the electronic dictionary very
much. It's blue and quite small. It fits into my pocket. I remember at that
time, my wife said to me :"she decided to immigrate to Canada with me.
In future, we must study very hard .And she hoped that the electronic
dictionary could help me to improve my English." On that day, I was very
happy because my wife agreed to immigrate to Canada finally. Also, with the
help of the electronic dictionary, I made such rapid progress that before
long I began to write articles in English.
1) In China, when will people send the present? Oh, attend the party, such as Wedding Party, Birthday Party. During Spring Festival, people give presents each other, including clothes, books, flowers and foods. 2) Compare the gift which people have received 10 years ago to the present that people now are receiving, what's the difference between them? ( try to compare the gift you received in your teenage with the gift children received now ) Oh, I think the gift was monotonic before. For example, I often received a notebook as gift. But now, there are various gifts to choose from. Such as flowers, wine, food, clothes etc. 3) Just image the gift in the future children will receive. In the future, I think more and more children will receive intellectual gifts, such as electronic dictionary, notebook computer and so on. 4) Just image the gift in the future people will receive. In the future, oh, in most case, people will give flowers each other. I think flowers will be the most popular present.
1. What is the
interesting building in your country?
2. What is it located?
3. What is it used
for?
4. Explain why you
think it is the most interesting?
I think the interesting building is the Great Wall. It runs
across north China like a huge dragon. It was used to enemies. Soldiers used
to keep watch on the Great Wall. When the enemy came , fires were lit to warn
other soldiers. I think the Great Wall is the most interesting building.
Because it is one of the wonders of the world and it was one of the few
man-made objects on earth that could be seen by the astronauts who landed on
the moon. Also, the Great Wall has become a symbol of both China's proud history
and its present strength.
1) Are there some old buildings in your hometown? Where and Describe it? Wenfeng Tower, built in 1420, is located in the southern of Anyang City. During the Ming and Qing dynasties, people came to the tower to worship the God of Heaven and pray for a good harvest. Nowadays, it serves as a museum of history. Murals of Wenfeng Tower give visitors a feel for the great artistic achievements of ancient Chinese civilization. In a word, I think the Wenfeng Tower is the most interesting building, and it is the oldest building in my hometown. 2) Compare the differences between the constructions in your city with them in 20 years ago? Describe the building styles in detail? The traditional buildings are made of the red brick and always have curved eaves. Thousands of buildings look the same. But now, various buildings with different colors and styles have been going up in my hometown. In addition, room is equipped with kitchen and bathroom. This is very convenient. 3) What are people's attitudes to old building today and that of our later generation? Should we protect them? Why? People, including our later generation, advocate that government should protect old buildings .Because old buildings represent the great artistic achievements of ancient Chinese civilization. 4) What role do you think the old and modern buildings play in the society? Oh, modern buildings are for us to live and work, while old buildings are for us to visit and research. 5) Compare the differences between house and apartment? In China, there is a big yard beside house, where we can plant some flowers and trees etc. But house is more expensive. Apartment is convenient and cheap but small.
1. Who is your best
friend?
2. How did you meet?
3. What do you do with
your friend?
Tell me the way you make friends with others and youu think what
people should be your friends?
My best friend is xxx. We were in the same class for 5 years. At that time, we often gather together to study and play. Now, we work in the same company. Friendship is extremely important to me. It’s like being brothers or sisters, but even more than that. I mean, I would do nearly anything for my friend, and I would expect that he would do the same for me. If he didn't help me when I was in need, then I would not consider him a good friend. I have a lot of different kinds of friends. Some are loud, others are shy. I prefer having a real variety of friends. 1) Do you think it is easy to make friends in China? Yes, of course. Nowadays, transportation and communication are easy and convenient. We have more opportunities to meet all kinds of people and make friends with them. 2) what do you think the difference between adults and children making friend? The difference is attitude or mindset between adults and children making friend. In general, children like to make friend with good students because they can help each other in studying. But adults make friends with anyone they like. 3) How do children make friend? Children to children. 4) What is the most important thing in friendship? Trust. 5) What is the second important thing in friendship? Helping each other. 6) What makes friendship break up? Misunderstanding. For example, when I studied in Chongqing University, one day, my roommate lost his watch. He thought I had taken it. At that moment, I was very angry but I said nothing, and then I helped him to look for the watch. Finally, we found it in his pocket. My roommate apologized to me. I forgave him his rudeness. So, I think trust is the most important thing between friends.
There are many festivals in China, such as Spring Festival,
National Day and Yuan Xiao Festival etc. The Spring Festival is the biggest
festival in China. I suppose it's somewhat like Christmas is in western
countries. Spring Festival is the only time when all families gather together
and stores and business are closed for several days. During the Spring
Festival, we eat delicious food, visit relatives and friends, and watch TV to
welcome the New Year. I also like to try and contact some friends before and
see how they’re doing and what they’ re up to.
We give each other presents for the New Year.
Describe your latest interesting travel in detail.
1. When and where you
go?
2. Whom you go with?
3. What things you do?
Last year, I went to Shilin with my wife. Shilin, is located
about 80 kilometers from Kunming. Kunming is the capital city of Yunnan
Province .It took us 3 days to get Shilin. Shilin is famous for its large
areas of stone forests. All stones in Shilin are vividly shaped, resembling
various figures. Some stones look like a monkey, and some stones look like a
bird. In a word, the stones are fantastic. In addition, I met a classmate of
Chongqing University in Shilin. We talked about the things and persons which
we remembered in school. I think that is an interesting trip.
1) Describe some interesting things happened during your travel. Can u describe it for me? Ok. I met a classmate of Chongqing University .We talked about the things and persons which we remembered in school. I think that is an interesting thing. 2) What is your goal to travel and your reason to travel is I enjoy traveling. It is so interesting to see how other people live, and it is really an amazing way to learn about different cultures. 3) Describe the advantage and disadvantage of travel for the country Tourism is a useful source of foreign currency for the country, but sometimes so me visitors destroy cultural heritage. 4) Why China can attract people to travel? A 5,000--year cultural heritage attract more people to China. 5) Do Chinese people like to travel now? Yes, of course. Since the opening-up, transportation is easy and convenient. Also, we have ample money for the journey. 6) Which festival do people travel in and where do people travel to? We often go to resorts around National Day, such as Forbidden City, Summer Palace, and Temple of Heaven in Beijing. 7) Compare the difference about traveling among Chinese people between 100 years ago and now? 100 years ago, transportation was very difficult; few people could travel in China because most of people were very poor. But now, transportation is easy and convenient and we have ample money for the journey.
1. What is the most
beautiful natural scenery you have ever seen?
2. What is the
specific point?
3. Where did you see
it?
4. Who did you go
with?
Last year, I went to Shilin with my wife. Shilin, located about
80 kilometers from Kunming. Kunming is the capital city of Yunnan Province.
It took us 3 days to get there. Shilin is famous for its large areas of stone
forests. All stones in Shilin are vividly shaped, resembling various figures.
Some stones look like a monkey, and some stones look like a bird. In a word,
the stones are fantastic. Also, there is a lake in Shilin. Surrounded by
green mountains and forests, the lake is not destroyed by any pollution.
Travelers can row a boat on the lake or stroll on the shores to enjoy its
special quiet beauty.
1) What measures does your government take to protect natural scenery? The government establishes protective zones of natural scenery. Educate people to protect natural environment. People who destroy natural scenery will be punished. 2) Do you think it is effective? Yes, of course. Establish protective zones can prevent pollution. 3) What role does tourism play in your country's economy? Tourism is playing a more and more important role in our country's economy. Since the opening up, the number of tourists has increased quickly, and this is a useful source of foreign currency for the country. (159 Also, tourism can accelerate other industry to develop.) 4) What should you pay attention to in travel? Safety, weather, and I think it is necessary to bring some medicine.
Give me some opinion on the transportation in your city?
In my opinion, one of the biggest problems of transportation is traffic jams in Anyang city. It has become common to see passengers and drivers having to wait in long lines of buses and cars moving at a snail's pace on the streets during the rush hours. There are several reasons for this problem. First, the number of vehicles is increasing much more rapidly than the building of roads. Second, there seem to be too many private cars and not enough public buses. Third, many people, including drivers, pedestrians and cyclists do not obey traffic rules properly, especially at busy intersections. In my opinion, one of the biggest problems of transportation is traffic jams in Anyang city. In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures must be taken before things get worse. On the one hand, the government should invest more money in the building of new roads and the repairing and maintenance of old ones, particularly those in busy areas of the cities. On the other hand, the number of private cars in urban areas should be limited while the number of public buses should be increased. At the same time, it is essential that stricter traffic rules and regulations be issued to strengthen traffic control. 1) Compare the different transportation, such as between plane, train and car. Drive car to travel is convenient because we can set out at any time. But it is too slow and it may spend us much more time. Plane ticket is more expensive. So, I think train is the best transportation for me. 2) Can you just image the transportation in the future and describe it for me? In the future, the speed of car, train and plane will be faster. And, the transportation will be easier and convenient. 3) Just compare the transportation in the past and now? What transportation do you like and why? Nowadays, we have more choice on the transportation than the past. Such as tube, plane etc, even though in the small city. I like tube, because tube is safety and tube ticket is cheap.
What role do you think music plays in our life?
Just as other kinds of art, music has become an indispensable part of human culture. It brings us with nutritious spiritual foods, enriches our leisure life .In addition, music can do good to us very much. It can elicit the imagination of us. And, it teaches us how to distinguish beauty from nature. Listening to the music, I am sure you will soon be refreshed from a day's hard work and relax. 1) Can you tell me the western music's impact on the world music? Oh, it is a difficult question, the western music is definitely great, and it plays an important role on the world music. Many musical talents and eminent musicians have been trained in western country, such as Beethoven, Mozart and so on. 2) Do you think it's necessary to open a music course in high school? Yes, of course. There is usually 1 or 2 hours each week used for teaching music. I think there should be more, such as at least 3 or more. 3) What effects will take place u think to let children (students) study an instrument? Music can do good to children (students) very much. It can elicit the imagination of children (students). Also, it teaches them how to distinguish beauty from nature. 4) It’s often more easy for children to learn music than adults. Can you tell me why? Oh, that’s because it’s important to have soft fingers and palm to learn a music mechanism, such as guitar. Children have more flexible fingers and they are more likely to find the correct feeling. 5) Do u like music or not? Why? I like music. I like singing, especially in front of many people. I often sing for my friends. When they praise me, I feel happy. Also, listening to the music, I am sure you will soon be refreshed from a day's hard work and relax. 6) Describe the music you like most and tell me why? I like classic music. It usually has a slow rhythm and a pleasant melody. Listening to the music; I can soon be refreshed from a day's hard work and relax. 7) What are the differences in music between China and western countries? Oh, it is a big question; in general, the symphony of western countries is long while most of Chinese music is small piece.
What clothes do you like?
Clothes aren't only used to keep us warm. It has become a important part of modern civilization. Different nations have different styles clothes. And different styles clothes represent different cultures. All people want their life to be filled with variety, color and comfort by wearing clothes. We will have a good mood when we wear beautiful clothes. I like leisure clothes very much. Because it is not only cheap but also convenient to wear. (In addition, the material of leisure clothes is more environmentally friendly.) But I must wear work clothes when we are working. Otherwise, I will be fined. 1) What's the prescript on clothes when you are working? and just the prescript on clothes in school. We must wear work clothes ( a school uniform ) when we are working (in school). Otherwise, we will be fined.. 2) The different between the older and younger people on clothes. The older people think a lot of style and material. But the youger people would like to follow the fashion. Personality is the first consideration when younger people choose clothes. 3) Compare the differences between the clothes in ur city with them in 20 years ago. In the past, the colors and styles of clothes were very monotonic. Thousands of people look the same .But now, we can wear clothes with different colors and styles.
1. Who is this person?
2. How is he/she
similar to you?
3. What kind of family
is yours? Is it of a typical family structure in China?
My family is a typical family in China. There are grandparents,
parents, a brother, my wife and I in my family. I look just like my father.
Medium build, pointed nose and dense black hair. My father is very kind and
easy going. His love is the most selfless love. I am luck enough because I
have a good father. My father has been specially thirsty for knowledge as he
had only a few years of schooling himself. He believe that knowledge can
change fate. So, my father offer more opportunity for me to study (no matter
how poor my family was) To sum up, my family is harmony and our life is very
happy.
1) What do you think are the differences between families in and past and today, and what have caused these changes? In the past, there were several children in a family. But now, government has is sued "one - child policy" to limit the size of the family. So, there is only one child in a family. Couples will be punished financially if they have more than one child. This is "one - child policy". 2) What is your opinion of "one--child policy"? I agree with one--child policy. Because it is difficult to provide enough food and education for a large number of people. So, government must control the population. Also, it is the best way that we can find to control population. 3) What has your government done to support families? Such as Project Hope . It means that government supports the students in poor families to continue their schooling and improving their education conditions. In addition, our government establishes bead house to provide services for old people who have more difficulties or no families to take care of them.
1. where you met them?
2. what subject they
taught?
3. what was special
about them and explain why this person influenced you so much.
I think my first English teacher has greatly influenced me in my
education. I had some trouble in studying English when I studied in middle
school. I felt English was very difficult, so I didn’t like to study it .One
day, my English teacher spoke to me about the study of foreign languages . He
said :" You must do a lot of reading , listening and speaking. Never
mind, keep on trying, I believe you are a good student." In the years that
followed, I studied hard and made greater progress. My English teacher loved
his job and he was knowledgeable in his field. I love and respect him.
1) compare the differences between education in ur city with them in 20 years ago? In the past, many children can't go to school, and educational conditions were very poor. But now, government provide 9 years compulsory education. Each child who is 7 years old must go to school. And government provide much better facilities and staff. Also, schoolyards are beautiful than before. 2) compare the differences between university and middle school. We study basic knowledge in the middle school. But the course of university is practical and special, such as computer and business courses. 3) compare the differences between students now and past. At present , it is difficult for student to find job. So, their pressure is he aver than before.
Describe an interest or hobby that you particularly enjoy:
1. What this interest
or hobby is?
2. How long have you
been doing it?
3. What effect has it
brought to your life?
What do you think about the balance between the work and the
leisure?
I am a big table tennis fan, even though I am not very good at playing table tennis myself. I love to watch the game on TV. I have played table tennis whenever I get a chance since I studied in the middle school. Playing table tennis not only refreshes my body and makes me mentally alert ,and ready and eager to engage in the work of the day. In addition, a reasonable amount of exercise prepares the body for a good night's sleep. However, over-indulgence in physical exercise can do more harm than good. Because it will make you too tired to stay awake during the work. 1) Is it dangerous for people to spend too much time on hobby? Yes, over-indulgence in physical exercise can do more harm than good. I have noticed that some of my friends spend too much time on sports make themselves too tired to stay awake during the work. 2) Do you think hobby is beneficial to social life? Yes, of course. I make many friends during playing table tennis. So, I think that hobby is beneficial the social life. 3) Why do people like to watch games? Oh, it is a interesting question. Watching games can enrich our leisure life. Also, it is very exciting to watch a close game. 4) What is advantages and disadvantages for watching games? Watching games can enrich our leisure life. Also, it is very exciting to watch a close game. But over-indulgence in watching games can affect our rest. 5) What is the advantages and disadvantages between watching games and playing games/sports? Watching games can enrich our leisure life. Also, it is very exciting to watch a close game. Take part in sports can build our bodies and keep us healthy. But, over-indulgence in watching games or in physical exercise can affect our rest. 6) Do you think which sports demand enough courage? Oh, I think it is boxing . It is very dangerous and it can do harm to health of athlete. 7) What are the sporting facilities like in your hometown? Anyang City has a lot of modern indoor facilities offering bowling, table tennis, swimming etc. But , it's too expensive for most Chinese, and you have to belong to the club in order to use the facilities.
1. Do you often read
newspapers?
2. What's is your
reading everyday?
3. How frequent do you
read?
4. What do you like to
read the best?
I read newspapers everyday, such as Workers Daily, Henan Daily.
I enjoy reading.
It is so interesting to see how other people live and it is really an amazing way to learn about different cultures. In addition, reading can do good to us very much. It can elicit the imagination of us . I also like to read the China Today and China Daily. Both of these magazines are in English , and it is a good way for me to improve my English. 1) Do you like to discuss with others when you read books? Yes, I do . Because it is easy to understand the difficulty of books. 2) How long do you read? Usually, I read books or newspapers for 1 hour before I go to bed. 3) where do you like to read? In the library, because there are all kinds of books which I can read.
Describe a handcraft which is made by yourself Kite flying is
popular in China. Kites are often played with around the Qing Ming Festival
in April. I like kites very much and I can make kites myself. Once, I made a
kite. It was a beautiful swallow. Firstly, I collected 3 sticks and paper.
The paper was adorned with paintings. Secondly, I used 3 sticks to control
the paper, one linked to its neck, the other two linked with its wing. And
then, the work was completed. The kite flew lightly in the sky as if the
swallow was greeting the coming of the spring season.
What handcraft are there in China? Folk paper cuts, lanterns and kites, shadow play etc.
1. Talk about your
favorite restaurant.
2. Why do you like it?
Sichuan dish features pungent, spicy and salty flavors and tend
to go well with rice. Sichuan Restaurant is the largest restaurant in Anyang
City. The restaurant t is a beautiful, clean and it's price is cheap. My wife
and I often have dinner in the restaurant on the weekend. Stir--Fried Shredded
Beef is one of the restaurant's best dishes. It's made of fresh tenderloin
and celery. Condiments include vinegar, rice wine and ginger etc. When
finished cooking, the beef is red and the vegetables are green. The dish is
very delicious.
extension of the card topic: 1) What is the general ideas about fast food among Chinese people? Although fast food has little nutritional value, but it is a blessing for busy people. Few people eat fast food all the time usually for breakfast and/or lunch so they can help to balance their diet by eating a sensible evening meal. And I like to eat fast food. 2) what do you think about science in food processing(production)? Scientific processing(production) is important. Because it can keep us healthy. 3) what is your opinion on food production and the world's population. At present, it's difficult to provide enough food for world's population. So, on the one hand, we should limit population of world. On the other hand, we should manage to provide enough food.
1. Is there any
pollution in your city?
In Anyang City, pollution is serious. With the development of
modern agriculture and industry, more and more waste is produced. Most of
this waste is harmful. It goes into the water, the soil and the air.
Especially the air is often made very dirty by factories. In places around
big factories , trees and vegetables are often killed by the bad air. Also,
when we breathe the air, harm will be done to our health. Fortunately, people
are beginning to realize just how serious the whole situation is. Government
is taking measures to prevent pollution.
What has your government done to prevent pollution The measures are: 1) First, all new projects are to have lower discharge levels. 2) Second, all sources of pollution must be identified and monitored. 3) Third, all enterprises should assure a clean and safe work place.
1. What do you plan to
learn in the future?
2. Why do you want to
learn it?
3. Where and how will
you learn it?
I plan to learn computer science in the future. I am very
interested in it. There are too many things that I don't know about
computers. Also, computers play an important role in our life and are of
great use in every field. I think the whole society will be computerized
soon. I need more knowledge in this field to meet the great demands of the
application of computers. If things go well, I'd like to further my study in
computer science and I want to work on my Master's degree in Canada.
1) What's the most important skill nowadays? I think it is computer. Because computers play an important role in our life and are of great use in every field. 2) Are there any traditional skill in your country? what are they? Yes, such as sewing and weave cloth. I remembered that my grandmother used to sew clothes herself. But now, few people can do it. 3) Do you think it necessary to learn these skills? No, I just don't like to spend much time on sewing. Because we can buy all kinds of clothes in shop. 4) Is there any difference between your parents' study and nowadays children? In the past, when our parents studied in school, educational conditions were very poor. But now, children are lucky enough because government provides much better facilities and staff. 5) Do schools teach non-academic courses? Yes, of course ,such as music, physical education, and painting etc. 6) Should school responsible for teaching these non-academic courses? Yes, of course. Because school should stress student's moral, intellectual and physical development in a comprehensive way. |
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